winter’s eve
glassy-sky
visceral
layers
icebound
permafrost
reflects
tangible
up-ward,
sheet metal
pressed,
compressed arctic
sun
boreal
streak-creased
cloud sweeps
frozen air
stream
waxed
moon
shine
air thin
resin-binding
stripped
viscous strata
swirl
river
evaporated,
titrated
weaving-glacial
strand
plates
stacked,
contract,
cobalt-rail
ice cracked
grind
Barbara, October 2015
Some days.. the air is so frozen it looks like it could be a frozen lake overhead, with all of its layers of cracked ice and mysterious depths. I encountered just such a sky the other day but didn’t have my canon with me so I’ve used this photo from two years ago. I may replace it one day if I can capture that same image that only plays in my memory now. It’s late fall in the Northern hemisphere of our Canadian prairie.. our Winter’s eve.
This is a new form of poetry for me, experimenting after an illuminating Book Club discussion with Diane and friends about all sort of poetic styles and formats. It was more challenging to put together and feels awkward at times, but it was fun experimenting a bit with language.
ever,
Smidge
Your poetry is beautiful, and although a new form, you communicate it smoothly, Barb. Winter on your prairie is a good match for your exquisite words! ox
Thanks Debra, although some fellow prairie folks thought I was way too early writing about winter;)
I enjoyed the new poetry form, Barb. You created a great piece. xo
Thanks Kathi!! xx
You don’t really have snow like that already, do you, Barb?
Today there was a sapphire sky and 68F in the southern
Great Lakes. Stay warm !!!!! 🙂
We hadn’t.. but did just this morning. Even though I love snow, it was tough to see:P
I love your poetry Smidge. So beautiful. You really capture the essence of winter with this one. Such a talent!